
Cosmos in a Crucible
By Ajanta Paul
Penprints, 2026
Beyond Blind Spots
By Chitra Gopalakrishnan
Ajanta Paul’s ‘Cosmos in a Crucible’ published by Penprints Publication in 2026, is a collection of sixteen refined short stories that connect the details of everyday life—its tiny, precise, evocative, and often trying and annoying aspects—to a larger universe, the cosmos. Paul encourages her readers to recognise that the specifics of daily living, the microcosm, are not about things themselves but rather about our impressions of those things. It is not solely about facts, but about our interpretations of those facts; it is not just one particular feeling, but a confluence of emotions that shapes our understanding of the macrocosm, making it unique for each individual. The work suggests that everything is personalised, intuitive, impressionistic, and elusive, and that nothing is certain.
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The opening story, ‘Flat-Hunting’ exemplifies this idea. It revolves around a husband's search for a flat, but rather than focusing solely on his criteria—such as budget, space, airiness, view, safety, and light—it presents the experience through an empathetic lens shaped by his wife's biases and experiences. Her diverse thoughts and opinions provide the story with a delicate, almost translucent quality. In brilliant contrast, the language used is crystal clear. The vivid imagery captivates the reader, but it is the narrative voice that truly draws you in. It has a soothing quality with a touch of buttermilk twang and occasional sharpness, reminiscent of chili. This characteristic is evident in many stories, where the beauty of the language allows for a deeper engagement with the characters and the plot.
‘Echo’ engages deeply on an emotional level, exploring the themes of fear, its complexity, and inherent unknowability. During a picnic in a sunny, breezy outdoor setting, Deblina unexpectedly discovers a primordial natural chamber, reminiscent of how Adela Quested finds herself in a cave in E. M. Forster’s ‘A Passage to India’. This void forces her to confront her preconceived notions about her deepest fears as a woman, as well as her body, which has been conditioned to navigate danger and symbolic constraints for self-protection. Moreover, her understanding of her situation and life is shaped through the lens of another woman's experience, specifically that of a survivor of an acid attack. Paul’s use of flexible syntax in this piece is remarkable and imaginative, seamlessly conveying multiple perspectives without compromising the clarity of each.
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‘Annapurna Sweets’ invites readers into the delightful and scrumptious world of Bengali sweets, including pranharas, jalbhoras, kheerkodombos, kalojams, and rossogollas. However, it also explores the bitter rivalries between two families, symbolised by the split of a shop and a separating wall that represents their enmity. The story highlights the changing perspectives of the emerging generations amid the complicated and conflicting dynamics of family relationships. Ratan, who frequents both shops, struggles to choose between them, which adds to the tension and uncertainty in the narrative. While his story may suggest that unity among the families is impossible, just as in the larger world, it raises the question of whether a deeper connection is achievable. This is left for the reader to contemplate; the ending may come to their rescue.
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‘Makeover’ layers the landscape of a beauty parlour its order, its routines, its aromas arising from shampoos, colouring agents and conditioners, and its clicks and buzz of scissors and hair-dryers against a larger, darker, and wilder terrain of sexual harassment that lacks beauty and aesthetic. Rhea, the beautician; Madhuri, her co-worker; Mon, their client; Dinshaw, the owner; and her unnamed son are caught in a tangled situation that each must unravel on their own, as there are no single or easy resolutions. Rhea is caught between two parallel narratives—those of her coworker and client—along with multiple perspectives, read consciousness, one of which includes the perpetrators’ viewpoint presented through indirect discourse. This perspective undermines the victims’ stories, obscuring it with their own version of events. Is this a never-ending cycle of disappointment, or can women find the courage to seek and share their truths? The readers are invited to look beyond the layers to discover the answers.
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'The Patchwork Quilt ' again beautifully showcases Paul’s skill in layered writing, with each layer adding depth, complexity, and resonance for the reader. She intricately weaves multiple elements into the same scene, in particular, using numbers and an imaginary quilt that play significant roles in the plot, character development, theme, and emotional impact. This story follows an eleven-year-old boy and his mother in a hospital, where he attempts to understand her condition through non-verbal cues. He observes her appearance, the numbers on her monitor, the nine atop his birthday cake, the registration number of their old car (4868), and a jumble of other facts and figures that make up his youthful experience to make sense of the unfamiliar world he is thrust into. The narrative evokes the stream-of-consciousness technique used by James Joyce, incorporating inner monologue, associative logic, and sensory triggers.
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The ‘Recipe Book’ is another instance of Paul’s nuanced exploration of how our minds work. Through Sushoma’s sensual decoding of her foremother’s recipe book and the narrator Riyanka’s, her much removed descendent, making sense of her insights, through a variety of moods, sensations, desires and family equations, the writer skilfully intertwines their inner and outer experiences, revealing their profound awareness while creating an intimate connection with readers. Although both women are separated by time, their efforts to understand the secret ingredients and proper proportions of macher jhol, shukto, and payesh serve as a means of exploration and negotiation as they seek to assimilate into their larger family and the world around them. The story bubbles with a subtext under the surface that informs the scene but is not overtly discussed.
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The ‘Treasure Hunt’ is a quirky, roguish exploration of sin and retribution, delivered through the perspectives of two characters: Silkina, the cat, who experiences the world through the smells and tastes of milk, fish, and mice. These senses also lead her into the unknown depths of shadowy past histories and their murky underbelly. On the other hand, there’s Monty, the homemaker and wife, who is hosting a party for her husband, Vish. Ajanta Paul skilfully shifts the narrative between the present and the past, altering the guests' and readers' perceptions as dark, unexpected secrets come to light, threatening to irreparably change the dynamics of their current relationships.
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In a similar vein, ‘Snakes and Ladders’ explores the evolving dynamics between Ramen and Reena, a newly married couple, as they renegotiate their perceptions of each other's realities and identities as submerged truths gradually come to light. Paul examines how our belief systems, particularly those related to gender, shape our understanding of the world. But what happens when these beliefs are questioned, turned upside down, or when the truth becomes neither singular nor universal? Ajanta Paul delves into this concept in ‘The Magic Box’ as well where a young student named Pia uses a transistor to project her dreams and gain insight into the larger world around her, particularly its gendered truths. Will her beliefs shatter when the transistor breaks, or can she find a way to redeem her dreams?
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The stories in ‘Cosmos in a Crucible’ work a peculiar magic. They catch the imprints of the world we live in, for the readers, adrift as we all are in the sea of uncertainty, while also uplifting them to seek anchors of safety. Pluming the depths of the psyche and the traumas that shape human existence, through shifting perspectives, Ajanta Paul hits the right notes for a crackling read.
About the Author
Ajanta Paul

Ajanta Paul is a widely-published poet, short story writer and critic from Kolkata, India. An academic, Ajanta is currently working at Women's Christian College, Kolkata. She is a Pushcart nominee who has published her poems and short stories in various reputed Indian, American and Canadian online literary journals in addition to print media including The Statesman, The Economic Times, among others
About the Reviewer

Chitra Gopalakrishnan, a writer based in New Delhi, uses her ardour for writing to break firewalls between nonfiction and fiction, narratology and psychoanalysis, marginalia and manuscript, and tree-ism and capitalism.